Oh! It feels so nice to watch
This crystal clear blue sky
As my heart seems up a notch
To see a view this high...
This moment I'd like to see
Feeling refreshed anew
A time I most want it be
To gaze this sky with you...
In dreams I hope you will come
So I can tell you why
Of how deep in love I am
With you my dearest one...
As you look up in the sky
And if it makes you smile
Same I see here with my eyes
Though far, a thousand miles!
As you look up in the sky And if it makes you smile Same I see here with my eyes Though far, a thousand miles! an eloquent and beautiful write 10+++
Beautiful write with a desire to see your loved one to look together at the clear blue sky only though you're so far apart!
Wonderful poetry...it was really a pleasure reading it!
Lovely lines loaded with love and inspiration! !
Nice write Jesus, As you look up in the sky And if it makes you smile Same I see here with my eyes Though far, a thousand miles! Nicely articulated JD...I vote 10+++
Well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Beautiful poem written in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
Like gazing at the sky, my love for you has no boundaries. Nice write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
combine nature and love into a single entity is a wonderful thing and you very well describe it a beautiful poem to read