black broken heart

Rookie (15/11/93- / in the arms of my love)

Its All Your Fault - Poem by black broken heart

The world around me is dark,
And there’s nothing to do,
You stabbed me in the back,
Is that all you can do?

I sit in the dark,
And I cut myself,
I don’t cry,
There’s no point,
I used to scream,
But not no more,

You probably think
That I’m a dill
But really I’m not
I’m just different to you

They call me emo
What’s that mean?
Everyone knows
I slit my wrists
I listen to scream-o
And I wear dark clothes

Does all this make me emo?
I guess so…
But I care,
I love,
But barely ever cry…
You made me do this,
The day you started to touch,

That day you lied me down,
And then tryed,

You denied it all,
You said I was wrong,
But I know what happened,
When where, what time,
And most of all how,

No one believed me,
They didn’t give a f**k,
Its been stuck in my head for years,

You always drink,
You always smoke,
You always look at me,

The day you did that
Is the day I died,
You took my life away,
That day you tried,

I now hate you,
You know why,
I told a friend, and they said OK.


Comments about Its All Your Fault by black broken heart

  • (6/26/2008 3:31:00 AM)


    Sweet BBH... hee she / he hee..remember that 'your' also contains the word 'our'.... very important here... takes two of you... and in the middle of 'our' is 'u'.... that is sometimes the one to reflect on... forget the bigger parts when it gets tough, ..... see you tomorrow hey... same time xx (Report) Reply

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  • (6/25/2008 7:59:00 PM)


    i believe that no ones emo, theyre misunderstood. im sorry for what happened to you. i truely am. i must say that you are very strong to have held on so far. i must say though, Go Ahead And Cry. let it all out. and im sorry. ill be praying for you. love your poem btw. its sad but its a very beautiful piece. (Report) Reply

  • (6/25/2008 3:41:00 AM)


    this is really sad. you pour your heart out in your poems and i can really feel your pain. life is really hard and people will betray you and hurt you. i know... i got illegally engaged when i was 15, he cheated and broke my heart... i know how it feels to be betrayed. i have suffered from clinical depression since i was young... you need to get some help... pls take heed of this... i really do know how you feel. (Report) Reply

  • (6/24/2008 6:56:00 PM)


    i didn't just say ok... ily hunni, it'll all be ok! ! i promise! (Report) Reply

  • (6/23/2008 10:34:00 PM)


    I could feel so much pains in your work...The imagery was good...I enjoyed reading....

    Thanks,
    Cate
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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 23, 2008



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