Its Unfortunate... Poem by silent soul

Its Unfortunate...

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What you waiting for when the world already started going
No one stands for long for anybody to move on
Everything is disappearing and soon will be gone
Neither you and I would exist
But the world will go on
As it doesn’t care who is alive and who is dead
Only the wealth talks in everyones word.
Humanity is lost in air and has dissolved with the world pollution,
Nothing nothing matters to anyone if you have fallen in pit
No hands will come forward to carry you,
only disgrace will be present when they see you there.
People fighting for status and money.
Do we really need it? ?
Is survival only based on it?
The answer comes yes from everyones mouth
This shows how unity and humanity
Both died in terrible death! !
Its unfortunate that all we care is to survive in this place
rather then just help each other and be content….
But No,
comes straight away and says all is money and status in this place…..
people say its reality,
I say its foolishness and their blindness that they measure survival with money and status.
But this is also another reality,
people like me are few and in world like this we are the ones who face the humility! !
As I say I don’t care what all they say, as long as I have in me
My faith! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 22 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Silent. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Ency Bearis 03 October 2008

I can see your sentiment..a write of truism..well narrated and written.. a great piece..... Ency Bearis

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Tai Chi Italy 03 October 2008

You speak many truths here silent soul and your conclusion is very important, because when it comes to bringing about change, we have to have faith and not care what others sink to, but keep on holding your head above the mirky waters of humanity....humility is a great tribute to being a good human being imo. Lovely message to establish a change. Smiling at you, Tai

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