Tuesday, January 16, 2007

January Blues? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Well yesterday was so very grey.
Last night I met my friend and he said
“yes it’s been a grey, blue day”.
Why is it that when it is grey
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Original Unknown Girl 16 January 2007

Have to concur with Fran here David, this is wonderfully depicted! The final stanza does steal the show! HG: -) xx

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Francesca Johnson 16 January 2007

An excellent write, David, especially that last stanza. Top marks. Love, Fran xx

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Lee Hepworth 16 January 2007

The end really makes you think what colour is it, changing with our mood maybe thats the answer, good write.

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David Taylor

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