January Blues? Poem by David Taylor

January Blues?

Rating: 5.0


Well yesterday was so very grey.
Last night I met my friend and he said
“yes it’s been a grey, blue day”.
Why is it that when it is grey
A blue heart often comes to stay?

Today I am hoping for, blue sky.
Perhaps the blueness from my heart will fly
to join the colour in the sky.
And leave my heart with a different hue.
One that’s full of joy and true.

If only I can remember the colour it was.
Vibrant pink or gentle green or raucous red?
Or was it just a pure clear canvas
on which we write our dreams
and paint a rainbow of emotions?

Tuesday, January 16, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: colour,pink,rainbow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 16 January 2007

Have to concur with Fran here David, this is wonderfully depicted! The final stanza does steal the show! HG: -) xx

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Francesca Johnson 16 January 2007

An excellent write, David, especially that last stanza. Top marks. Love, Fran xx

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Lee Hepworth 16 January 2007

The end really makes you think what colour is it, changing with our mood maybe thats the answer, good write.

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