Wednesday, November 23, 2005

Japanese Cartoon Comments

Rating: 4.9

Minds ignited by several days
Of sleeplessness and amphetamines
Create dark myths
And then slide into nightmares and dreams
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Uriah Hamilton
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COMMENTS
Mary Nagy 23 November 2005

Wow! There is so much going on in this poem.......great job Uriah. Great images. Sincerely, Mary

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 23 November 2005

Very colorful and vivid! ! ! interesting write!

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Marcy Jarvis 23 November 2005

haha! ! this is a pleasant surprise, Uriah!

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Charles Chaim Wax 23 November 2005

vivid and alive the words plunge and dive in furious mystery creating a fine poem

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