Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Jerome The Gnome Comments

Rating: 5.0

Underneath my lemon tree,
There is a door that has no key.
The door leads to a little house,
That would not accommodate a mouse.
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Juan Olivarez
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Heather Wilson 23 April 2012

Oh, lucky Sherry to have a boyfriend like Jerome, what a sweet poem, I will sure to be back for another read.later, I loved the matchbox bed and the lollipop stick, .it`s just an Ahhhh

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Wendy Thopliss 18 January 2011

Lovely Juan, very sweet and really gets the imagination going, The only problem i had with it was i didn't want it to end. Wendy.x

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Smoky Hoss 18 January 2011

Nice mix of mythology figures with good humor, I really enjoyed reading this short talented poetic story.

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