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Join The Army

Rating: 4.6
Choking smoke
Rolling thunder
The forgotten soldier
Still cries for his mother
Crouching still
with blood stench steaming
The forgotten soldier
Has lost all feeling.

Shocked eyes glance
From corpse strewn clay
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Dee Daffodil 13 July 2006
Great piece...full of very strong imagery...powerful and moving. Well done! Hugs, Dee
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Jerzegirl *~~ 10 April 2006
This poem is very powerful and very visual. I would imagine that it could only be written by someone who has experienced it first hand.
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IT'S ME K.S.Z. 19 December 2005
Dont join the Army! Good poem though! I liked it a lot. Anyways the Army will ruin your life and cause you lot's of pain. Take it from me I would know! Kevin
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Jerry Hughes 22 October 2005
wonderful writing, Willow. Well done...
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