Thursday, October 1, 2020

Join The Others Comments

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"Join the others.
The ones doing their best.
To hush and smother up,
Their sighing and wounded tears."
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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L Milton Hankins 01 October 2020

Nice flow. I like this poem because it gives good, sound advice, and it held my attention longer than most poems that run down a page do.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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