Journey On Ship Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Journey On Ship

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Hollow lives
Forcefully to live
And believe
In its worth to live

I am tired
Of being admired
Lies received in abundance
Makes me sad at once

I can’t disappear
Or hide and go in rear
I have to face
And follow the chase

I am part
Can not easily depart
From established customs
That has been done seldom

I may go slowly
Smile to keep and behave gently
I should not treated as different sheep
“Life is battle with journey on ship”

Friday, September 6, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: customs
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2013

very well done Roland 'KingShip' Ediare1 minute ago A true disciple of hope...This poem portrays hope and resilience. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2013

Again, I am sorry Michelle Mattes1 minute ago Hard to read. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago have positive views to pic from negative views

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2013

Hollow lives Forcefully to live

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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