Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 371,059 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Joy Really - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Just a minute
Be little mute
Wait and dilute

It will die down
Early anger known
If insult is not grown

So try hard
With no word
But look toward

The end story may be different
The result may apparent
So live in present

Old habits die slowly
You try and swallow gradually
Life may give you joy really

Comments about Joy Really by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2013 2:58:00 AM)

    Wonderful and Introspective

    Jen WallsLess than a minute ago
    This poem spoke deeply in heart about contentment's joy...only living in the present! Super!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2013 2:57:00 AM)

    Chris Cowan11 minutes ago
    a little uncentered
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2013 2:41:00 AM)

    Just a minute
    Be little mute
    Wait and dilute
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, July 22, 2013

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