Judgement Poem by Arline Richards

Judgement

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judgement comes,
judgement goes,
judgement is all over the world,
but why i ask,
why do people have to judge the looks of a person or judge them by their visions of perfect,
judgements dont help anyone just tears a person down,
makes their insides hurt with overwellingly pain,
when i talk i know what it feels like,
to feel the lowest amount of the person u truly are,
so judgement comes,
judgement goes,
judgement is all over the world and im tired of poeple judging me!

Monday, April 10, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: judgement
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 27 April 2006

Nicely stated Arline, a very mature and sensible write! ! I wrote a similar poem titled 'Reflection'. Nobody likes to be judged... and those who do judge risk bringing judgement upon themselves. Brian

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Duncan Wyllie 10 April 2006

These are very wise words from you .Encourage someone, do not dictate in a forceful manner, they will be less likely to listen or to truly see your intentions, a great write from you, Love Duncan

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