Judgment Poem by Amanda Eckols

Judgment

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Judgment is a fire
A useful tool
To better our self
And those who aren’t fools
But once it was learned
Other uses discovered
A purposeful fire
The causer of destruction
A match lit to burn the home
Leave one hopeless
And seemly alone
Rebuild the heart
To with stand the fire
A warming heat
In the cold dark night
Don’t worry child
The sun shall rise
A great ball of fire
Aimed to help celebrate your day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2009

In the cold dark night Don’t worry child The sun shall rise A great ball of fire Aimed to help celebrate your day...great hope must lie in everything.. this will only enhance yourconfidence in life.. beautifulpoem....10 read mine hopes against hopes... what happens if..... all dreams not come true

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Allan O 07 November 2009

very pleasant read....thank you Amanda ~^..^

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