Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Rookie - -2 Points (Singkir Laut, Kedah, Malaysia)

Jungle Of Life - Poem by Ibnu Din Assingkiri

In the jungle of life
There were many silt trails
I sunk to the bottom
Of the tricky mud

Since I submerged
In the bottom of errors
Asphyxiate became norm
United into consciousness

I climb the slope of pains
Walked on thorny path
With severe foot pain -
Barefooted, of course!

I was immune
To the thorny jungle
And I will not die
In the pricks of obstacle


Comments about Jungle Of Life by Ibnu Din Assingkiri

  • Heather Wilkins (10/9/2013 8:53:00 PM)

    oh the jungle of life can be so cruel. but we must trudge on. nice write (Report)Reply

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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/5/2013 2:57:00 AM)

    A painful full of human grief and folly A lovely poem I like this and request the Hon. poets, please read and comment/ PH should notice this poem thank you Glory to be Allah (Report)Reply

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  • Philo Yan (10/5/2013 1:24:00 AM)

    What does not harm you will not kill you. Life can be a struggle sometimes. Perseverance is the key.
    And you have skillfully covered that in this poem.
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  • (10/3/2013 4:10:00 AM)

    inspiring, it is. i like the last stanza especially. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 3, 2013


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