Just A Chance Poem by Vinny Asdario

Just A Chance

Rating: 5.0


Am I lost, Am I weird, Am I stupid..Yes, I am to blame
A feisty, pretty, kind, girl made me not the same
She has her love, her heart, she is content in her world
Ignored and ridiculed, I feel her cold

A cheating fool in her mind..is that my fate?
I am torn between a responsibility and missing a mate
I dread the day she disappears for my life would seem so bare
Cause I cannot shake off the feeling that..MAYBEshe cares! !




"what do you mean give a chance"
A chance to see me for who I am..to have a dance
A chance to be a real friend..to treat you like a princess in my world
A chance to try..not to pry.. To kindle feelings by being bold

A chance is all I ask cause it costs nothing and gives hope
It works out or not, I would have reached the end of my rope
Like a puppy at the door, I pine from afar
"Don't waste my time" she says "In my busy world I don't even know who you are"

See where a loyal, kind, honest, caring and loving person takes
Don't judge me as a fake cause a difference it makes
Feelings are hard to develop when restraints are there
A chance is all I ask as I let my soul bare! ! ! !

Just A Chance
Monday, November 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: caring,feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Trino 05 November 2018

Feel the pain. Hope she understands

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 10 November 2018

Good poem..........Happy journey. .............

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Susan Williams 06 November 2018

Vinny- - Thank you for sharing this- -very nicely done

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Max steyn 06 November 2018

Nice poem but dude unless you have a model body with plenty of dough and no questions asked..sorry

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Chinedu Dike 06 November 2018

Well thought-out and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme. Lovely and heartfelt. Thanks for sharing Vinny.

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Vinny 06 November 2018

Thank you for the kind words.

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Dave Walker 06 November 2018

Love and friendship are the best things in the world. A great write.

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