You sweetly echoed your love in my ear,
you led me mesmerize,
my eyes full of tears.
i didnt know,
what i was going through,
i flowed like a river,
it was so pure and true.
the wind whispering,
the breeze toiling,
u touched my hands,
and i was smiling.
it was love and passion,
that was filled in your kiss,
shiver ran through my veins,
and reached my hearts bliss.
i was on my toes,
and your finger on my lips,
you were ready to propose,
everything was on tips.
we were so close,
like the sea and the shore,
the time had that beauty,
the moment was allure.
you were about to say,
but something shook in my head,
it was just a dream,
i found myself in bed.......
Very beautifully expressed imagination and gripping narration and the ending is the anti-climax. An intelligent composition full of dream and romance.
A dream is a sure way of telling us that we are on the right track. Though disappointed, we ought to rise up and fight for our rights.A poem worth it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A sublime start with a nice poem, Seema. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.