Saturday, July 31, 2010

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I see the sun, shining every one eles out.
His brilliance makes me lust.
So bright and lovely.
So incredibly marvelous.
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Alice Kwan
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Meggie Gultiano 31 July 2010

this is a very beautiful write indeed

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David Beckham 31 July 2010

I danced as I read your poem. Its got lots of elements in it, 'sun, moon, stars' every poets tool box, has those and you used it to great perfection to describe your theme. excellent.

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