Just Broken Poem by Naial Oniblab

Just Broken

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Her brown eyes, so plum and alluring,
Soft lips, so sweet if ever kissing,
Hair that with the scented breeze is flushing,
And her smile, at me is addressing

I come near to utter my admiration,
Hoping for the congruous affection.
But then, I feel harsh rejection,
As a man came to proclaim their relation.

Monday, June 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbroken
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Herbert Poetry 05 June 2015

congruous affection beautiful words and lines. Superb poem

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Soul Watcher 02 June 2015

Short but very touching poem, thanks for sharing.

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