Thursday, August 17, 2017

Just Divorced Comments

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Richard Wlodarski
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Mj Lemon 18 August 2017

Very sublime, Richard. This one could represent the deepest desires of someone suffering in marriage, or it could be about one left alone. The divorce can be the goal, or the suffering can come with the realization that the divorced state is painful. Well done, Richard. This delivers an emotional impact, and prompts much thought.

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Richard Wlodarski 19 August 2017

Extremely insightful! ! ! M.J. thank you for your continued support and encouragement! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 17 August 2017

Painful is what i can see, the brief write and choice of words-death and cry- me you- compact but strong statement of emotion...I hope this nothing near you but Richard, Just divorce, it just....its not finally...that conclude life to end sadly. I wish you the best in life with great passion, patience, so you can re-envision what's next. Smile even it bitter, we will add sweetness later my dear friend! :)

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Richard Wlodarski 17 August 2017

Soul, the poem is on two levels. Firstly, it's for some of my friends who have gone through bitter divorces. And secondly, it's about a friend whose husband is in another relationship, but won't grant her a divorce. She wants to move on with her life, but he's stopping her.

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