Just Dream Poem by simling is the secret of the happiness

Just Dream

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Hang me, i need to
secure
touch my wound with
cure.
talk to my beat
and hear..
i will tell you about
your absence and the' fear'.
but please, , please
if you noticed my tear,
turn your head and disappeare.

REEM

simling is the secret of the happiness
Sunday, November 16, 2008
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Autum Skiles 16 November 2008

I totally understand this..It touched my heart

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Heather S 16 November 2008

this poem has great imagery and rhym. its a good poem

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 November 2008

Just dream and keep dreaming..until you smile.Keep writing Reem.You're talented.

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Sarah Abdullah 24 November 2008

if you noticed my tear, turn your head and disappeare. Simply Lovely...

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Caroline Weeks 17 November 2008

Very beautiful...especially loved the end.10 from me.

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Hershe Moore 16 November 2008

beautiful...this is a nice piece Reem

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*Trusting You* 16 November 2008

if you noticed my tear, turn your head and disappeare. these are very good lines Reem. sometimes we all feel like we want to run and hide when we cry and we dont wanna let anyone see. I like this poem. good job. Becca

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