Monday, April 21, 2008

Just Go Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just Go Away


Indignant you sit
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JoAnn McGrath
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Melvina Germain 11 May 2008

This certainly may be a short poem, but has big meanng. I sense a lot of hurt and anger here, one should possibly remove themselves fom the situation, analyse it, get help and try their best to work it out. Melvina

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 03 May 2008

Some times it's best to go your Separate ways, you've said all there is to say, it's time to call it a day... Andy xx 10

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David Harris 26 April 2008

Lil sis, a sad write so clearly expressed. I have a feeling I know the story behind this poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it Lil sis. Big Bruv

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Thad Wilk 21 April 2008

A really capturing though sad write JoAnn and you have executed it very well! ! ! *10*! ! Best always, Friend Thad

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