Just Let Me Go Poem by Tom Fox

Just Let Me Go



I wait, at the top of my bleachers,
Sitting alone, all alone with my thoughts.
And I just can't tell which is more painful,
The thoughts in my head or the living it now.
I can see my house from here.
It's not what I want but it's all that I've got.
The sun is above, but the breeze is so cold.
My knuckles are dry and my ears feel the chill.

I wish that the world was just given to me.
I wish that my skin was as tan as can be.
I wish that these thoughts would just leave me alone.
I wish that my house wasn't bought from a loan.
I wish that the sun would just burn off this breeze.
I wish that the world was just given to me.

Now I stand, on the roof of my building,
Tryin' to stay calm, at ease with myself.
But you just don't know what it does to my mind.
You just can't feel what I'm feeling inside.
So let me go, just let me go, oh let me go.
I wish I could just feel good about it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 26 September 2009

Well I will call you my brother But I Know you will not agree Sometimes I feel like taking my life away But..taking your life means you are a weak coward Face the world spit in it's face... Be a lion stop the complains!

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Tom Fox 25 September 2009

homies wrote comments before i got to...i'm very grateful! ...if I were braver or stupider i might just be suicidal...but i ain't...just a sufferer, like the rest of us!

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Ency Bearis 21 August 2008

a mind boggling thoughts stressful to overcome..a deep concept..greatly written.. Ency Bearis

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Anong All 20 August 2008

I am guessing that you are talking about life here. And well if life left you alone, you would probably not be, but yeah, the stress of it all can get overwhelming at times.

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