Don't love me anymore
No use of your bland console
Though I love you so much
All I got are so bad!
Don't put me in a bowl
I wanna know how I can grow
You never let me see the sky
All you said are just a lie!
Don't hurt me anymore
Let my dreams happily flow
You never put me first
So, your bubbles should be burst!
Don't look me as a crow
Sooner, you may get an angry blow
My heart is like a bomb
Your love is like poisonous comb!
Please let me just to go
If you can't make me glow
Just saying 'Good Bye'
I wish you to be still fine! !
good write! nice poem! I prefer the last two verses. I like it :)
wonderful job.it reminds me my chidhood when my parents didnt let me do whatever i wanted to do. tnx pal.
poetic justice...nice work pal keep it up dear l was going thru your poems l really enjoyed your poem my boy friend, life vs land&nightmare....keep it up....
A direct 'No' you must say to your lover if he happens to come on your doorway. Great!
How bad your lover is! I wish you will meet another smart guy whom u don't need to say goodbye.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
If your lover stands on th doorway of your dreams, thn you hav no choice but to push them aside, as stated in your poem. Good job girl.