*just Take You In Right Way* Poem by Fatima Obaid

*just Take You In Right Way*

Rating: 2.7


in the darkness of night when there is too silence
i have one pray to god just take you in right way

in the crowd of people when voices are high
i have one pray to god just take you in right way

in the rainy day when thunder is in sky
i have one pray to god just take you in right way

when happens are too much and i am feeling lonely
i have one pray to god just take you in right way

when good peoples are less and bad are much
i have one pray to god just take you in right way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 20 December 2015

Darkness, loud crowd, thunder and lightning, loneliness, bad people, then i pray to God. very very nice prayerful poem. i too pray when i am confronted with all these. thank you. you are becoming a divine poet. tony

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Khairul Ahsan 31 October 2015

Nice poem. Nice wishes and prayers.

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Khalida Bano Ali 01 September 2014

The prayer is nice but all the groups think they are right whereas all others are wrong. So instead of blaming the majority we should find out the similarities for coexistence.

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Yash Shinde 23 October 2012

written beautifully may god listen to your prayer soon...............good work..............

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