Tadapta hoo me har pal teri yad me,
Dhoondhta hoo tjhko har jagah,
toot gaya hoo tere jane ke bad me,
tere bin ab koi na raha jisko he meri parwah,
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Wonderful poem....really poignant.....thank you for sharing :)
Wonderful Poem written form the point of view of a child whose mother has left him/her and now the father and his new wife don't treat the child right. Bahut achi kavita likhi hai aap ne dil ko chu le ne wali Akanksha ji. Aap ka bahut abhar ye kavita sab ko dikhanne ke liye
Me aapka shukriya krti hoo ki aapne meri kavita ko itni geharai se padha...aapka bohot bohot shukriya
Wow! ! ! Such a wonderful poem Akansha.. Itni kam umar me apne ek booohot hi khoobsurat kavita likhi hai.. Thank you so much for sharing.. It is wonderful to see such young poets like you writing.. Thank you dear: -)