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Kalawakan

Rating: 3.2

Ako’y nalulumbay
Sa mga panahong
Ako’y nag-iisa
Ganito na lang ba
Sa bawat minutong nagdadaan
Na tila ba
Ako’y lumulutang
Sa hangin
Ng walang hanggang kalungkutan
Mga luha’y nagpupumiglas na

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Daly 24 November 2005

This is very brave, Marie, and I applaud you putting this piece on. I have no idea which languague it is (though something tells me it is a Native American laguage as it seems to have a unique construct but I also wonder whether this is a construct opf your own made up from a variety of laguages because there does seem to be hints of angloism as well as East European and East Asian, not that I am an expert) . Obviously I have no idea of its subject. Well Done on a fine piece of work Denis Joe

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