Kaze Aoi Poem by Timothy Weiermann

Kaze Aoi

Rating: 4.8


Somber torrents of death-laden wind
Carry the sad news of those that sinned
The inescapable currents hold those that the reaper may choose
And for those left dieing they have nothing to lose

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brittany graviet 06 October 2008

all of your poems seem to be very dark and forboding, but in a good way, not the depressing emo kind, the beautiful eye opening kind.

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Tyease Collins 11 August 2008

Another excellent dark poem. Just....awesome... absolutely nice such a few lines -Tess C.

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Dawn Slanker 07 August 2008

I really like your use of rhyme and word choice in this poem. Provocative theme...well written.

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