Keep Pace Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Keep Pace

Rating: 5.0


Each step takes me with you
To tell and prove that
Yes I am by your side
To take you away for ride

Not all may speak
With same as weak
I speak with force
So you feel joy sans remorse

Step you take
Not to fall back and retake
The direction otherwise
Well, it will be all surprise

You and I are wide apart
But it has made good start
I may have your magic spell
And fragrance to smell as well

Keep pace at faster rate
To show world an state
Look I have my companion
I shall be with him for union

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 December 2013

Each step takes me with you To tell and prove that

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 December 2013

Rohani Daud Beautiful words.. 12 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 December 2013

Maricela Ramírez Nice. 54 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 December 2013

Ok but more clarity needed friend Melvin Gillham3 hours ago It has merit, you may not be as familiar with our language as is needed but it has some flow to it Comment +1 ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 December 2013

Raducu Bogdan Serban4 hours ago Not great, but good enough.

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Gajanan Mishra 22 December 2013

companion and union, very fine composition sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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