Keeping A Promise Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

Keeping A Promise

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When I left home
I left there a piece of my mind
What it keeps saying to me
Robs my peace of mind

Your attention not paid
For her cat clawed cut
Asking her if it still hurts
Should have got her a band-aid

Defocused out of sight
Forgot so much from last night

Never asked once
If by any chance
Her feet’s ache still remains

If she in her morn’s walk
Felt the pain
And she was home before the rains

I think of asking her all these
The questions I left behind
Some more some more

Then in the evening
As she opens the door
I remember some
Forget more

Maybe not even one
I can remember
The pains of her
Inside outside

At night by her side
Promise her
I’ll not be forgetful

See her clawed thumb-head
Plastered with band-aid
Her feet swollen

And she promises
She will not go out in the rain again.

Monday, May 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 26 May 2014

The guilt we feel upon leaving. A good person always worries. You are a good person. And this is an eccellent work.

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