On her course merrily flows the svelte rivulet
She meanders not alone carries the sky on her breast.
In him grows a longing, love flowers in his heart
She doesn’t know it, on the sea is set her heart.
The two flows embraced in unrequited passion
The sky ferries his lover to her beloved ocean.
As soft and sweet as love could be. The Line swiftly and quietly enter the heart. Thanks.
A concise and insightful rendition in verse with rhythmic splendour. Lovely and very passionate.
in him grows a longing love flowers in his heart she doesn't know it on the sea is set her heart lovely worded
Simply phenomenal write.......Pradipji......great imagery.......you are amazing..........
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I would like to translate this poem
Chatto nice poem nice feeling thank for sharing