Keeping It Simple. Poem by Fay Slimm

Keeping It Simple.

Rating: 5.0


Affairs of the heart can be weighty,
Demanding our all, suffice to say
If that goes too far we can create
A monster, posing as love, which lays
Down innumerable rules. How to say what,
When to go there, fear is the worst part
Of pseudo-affairs. Sharing forgotten
Simplicity rare, caring departs
And sad hearts know nothing of romance.
Keeping laughter in love begets delight.
Bringing joy to our passion advances
Closeness. Shall we try 'simple' tonight?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 13 June 2009

Life would be so much easier wouldn't it...less hastle all around...your advice Fay my friend is a keeper for sure....well penned my lovely....keep'm coming

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Gordon Wilkinson 13 June 2009

ah simple beats the complications - 10

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Lady Grace 13 June 2009

keeping it simple is an asset..simplicity is beauty..grace

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Ashraful Musaddeq 13 June 2009

Charming composition- yes we should try simple- 10+++

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Surya . 13 June 2009

wow! you are an authority on matters of heart. well written.nice thioughts.voted10 surya

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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