Dorothy Pugin

Rookie (27 April 1965 / South Africa, living in the UK for the past 10 years)

Kelp Caress - Poem by Dorothy Pugin

Stay calm
ashore and
surface watch

Or dive
below still
waters feign

And tangle
flesh in
kelp caress.

Comments about Kelp Caress by Dorothy Pugin

  • Suchoon Mo (6/13/2006 11:54:00 PM)

    woman's white flesh being caressed by the undulating green kelp from the depth of the sea. It is strangely erotic. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/9/2006 11:28:00 AM)

    This is a deep one. One thinks of the sea - and the sea of subconsciousness - and then the sensual ending makes you certain it's the sea. But, then you think, well, we often find something surprising - or disturbing - when we dive into our dreams, memories, reflections, going beneath the surface. The surface seems attractive, too, in this one. Anyway, it's such a beautiful poem. I love your spare - and evocative imagery. Please, post more for us! Lovexx Will (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 13, 2006

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