Too Kind Poem by Dorothy Pugin

Dorothy Pugin

Dorothy Pugin

South Africa, living in the UK for the past 10 years

Too Kind

Rating: 5.0


Oh frail my heart
kindness pray spare me
the tip touching of paper fingers
gentle water my cheeks

Apr 97

Friday, May 12, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: kindness,water
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jerry Hughes 09 June 2006

Remarkably succinct imagery...

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Will Barber 09 June 2006

This is remarkable. Are you sure you haven't a few more in the notebook? I mean, anyone who writes this one must have more than 5 poems stashed away. Just remarkable.

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Duncan Wyllie 12 May 2006

I could melt into this one with ease, you've put this so well, Love Duncan

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Dorothy Pugin

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South Africa, living in the UK for the past 10 years
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