Kill Me Whole! Poem by Iman Sadikeen

Kill Me Whole!



Slay me not with thy words my love
So cold and harsh, unfriendly were they!
Not the sharpest of daggers could mutilate a soul
For thine had ripped my heart out
Tears do flow so profuse from my eyes.
What had i done to earn them?
But merely love thee in the sincerest way i knew
Thee taught me to love,
will not now thee teach me to hate?
Treat me not a dog, yet i shadow thee as one.
why did thou leave me bleeding so?
Ripping my heart from my frail soul
Kill me whole, i beg thee kill me whole.
life had lost its charm, ever so long
And existence is pain in a lonely world.
I lie limp, with no hopes for the morrow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Brookes 24 November 2011

A lovely poem Beautifully written. However try and take the thees and thous out. It sounds better on the, not so archaic.

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