Killed With You Poem by Twiggy C. Tubercio

Killed With You

Rating: 5.0


i dont want this to be a memory
emotionally cut the emotionally scarred
cant be a memory
dealing would be way too hard
look what ive done
hurt the one i love

i cant run
walking with the one i love
we die together
did i kill you?

2nd feather
peeling off the wings of an angel
dying
mangled
nothing can repair the damage
nothing can repair the damnage

three squeeze melody
selfish sincerity
what have i done
stabbed the wounded heart

cant repair the damages
one chance
managed to blow it twice
the good times are killing me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mimi Fakhira 17 March 2009

Nice... Keep writing. 10+++. MIMI

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Lucas Akkadian 10 February 2008

Kudos to you for successfully writing an decent original poem about an almost cliche' topic.

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