Negative Picture Poem by Twiggy C. Tubercio

Negative Picture



look at that boy

just sitting in the corner

hes getting colder

as we're getting warmer

he sure is missing out

to bad for him

perfectly dry

lets take a swim

look at those people

happy for now

until they get abandoned

and they wont know how

everything there doing

doesnt even matter

in the end all the happiness they gain

will make them even sadder

why does the boy in the corner

wear such different clothes

nobody likes him

i wonder if he knows

whats he trying to prove

whats he trying to say

the only thing hes doing

is wasting away

look at them

they all dress the same

hollywood clones

searching for fame

stupid clothing styles

change with people they hate

flashy lights and prison lined rags

is just there bait

whos to judge who

you copy me

i copy you

no individuality

everyone is like someone

accept the fact

we are only separated by our opinion

(Copyright ©05/2008)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 23 May 2008

Very interesting and a good point. no individuality everyone is like someone accept the fact we are only seperated by our opinion If people could only accept differences which should be reasons for sharing and bringing us closer together.

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