Killing The Female Stereotype Poem by Violet Llewellyn

Killing The Female Stereotype

Rating: 5.0


You think I'm weak
That all I do is twirl
In a dress
Just because I'm a girl

I can tell you now
That that's not right
I'm one girl
Who knows how to fight

I don't care if I break a nail
Or if my hair is out of place
And you'll rarely find me in the bathroom
Putting makeup on my face

I don't spend every night with my friends
Gossiping on the phone
And don't be surprised if you find me
Spending Saturday night all alone

Now you might say I'm joking
But I don't care what you think
I could kill you so many ways
Before you had time to blink

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Im too late to comment 21 October 2018

Im gonna be real here because I want you to improve you might have gotten better with writing but this poem is too straightforward and simple use figures of speech and symbolism your first part should have been your last part because it had the most impact because of just because I'm a girl I'm really just here because of an assignment and I'm no expert either I just wanted to voice this out and be of help to you

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Rachel Baumgardner 14 December 2007

'...all I do is twirl In a dress Just because I'm a girl' thats my favorite part of the poem. I can really relate to this poem.

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Raven black 01 August 2007

nice poem storm..very inspirational..more women need to come forward and go against the stereotype and just be who they are...more power to you girl.

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DMG Emmie 31 July 2007

THAT IS THE BEST POEM YOU HAVE WRITTEN.....REMINDED ME A LOT OF ME....IT WAS REALLY GOOD.....YOU MIGHT BECOME FAMOUS ONE DAY...lol.... Keep Writing

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riley 01 June 2018

you don't have to be such an

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Dom Wisperez 23 July 2007

you must be a gothic girl.

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riley 01 June 2018

Or a woman?

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