Killing Time Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Killing Time

Rating: 4.3


Suddenly, I'm old.
My bones, slaked with cold,
jangle with the sound
of rubbing in my ears.
Tears don't come easy.

The teasing street wind
whistles without favour,
and I am slow.

Taking refuge in Tesco,
talking to widow women,
likened with the situation....
their shopping trolleys
half full of expense and need,
I pause....

Freed from time
we kill it
with our jargon.

Monday, September 23, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: shopping,teasing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 29 November 2019

Appreciate your reply to my comment, received more than six years belatedly though.

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Sally P. P. 28 March 2020

I’m just catching up. Nice to know you. x

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Valerie Dohren 23 September 2013

I'm with you in the Tesco queue now Sally - very poignant.

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Sally P. P. 11 May 2019

Thankyou for your comment.... I get slower and slower. All best wishes to you. Sally.

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Sally P. P. 09 May 2019

Thankyou, Valerie. I make the trip most Tuesdays, any weather. Old age creeps.

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Khairul Ahsan 23 September 2013

'Freed from time we kill it with our jargon.' Words told from deep perception! Loved these lines.

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SallyP. P. 29 November 2019

Thank you for your interest.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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