Ari Alsio


Kiss Away (Tanka) - Poem by Ari Alsio

There´s a shadow
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kiss it away
all the hard times we been
we never mind them care

Topic(s) of this poem: kiss


Comments about Kiss Away (Tanka) by Ari Alsio

  • Kelly Kurt (9/23/2015 2:28:00 PM)


    There's-a-sha-dow - 4
    Au-to-play-next-poem - 5
    Kiss-it-a-way - 4
    All-the-hard-times-we-been - 6
    We-ne-ver-mind-them-care - 6

    I'm not sure what your intent was for the last 2 lines. I think something got lost in the translation.
    The auto play that is on some poems here, doesn't give enough time to read short poems before it switches to the next one. That can be aggravating when trying to leave a comment.
    Peace
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    Ari Alsio Ari Alsio (9/24/2015 1:43:00 AM)

    I meant that Finland bytes go differently, that is, . Thus, the word haibun, even if the calculated two bytes of English, four calculated in Japanese (ha-i-bu-n): and the word is itself, which English-speakers should be viewed as a single byte consists of two: a short vowel o and moraic's nose. This is illustrated on a whiff, which includes a 17, but only 15 bytes. On the other hand, some sounds, such as Kyo (き ょ) can display two bytes of English speakers, but are in fact a single (plus one byte) in Japanese. Peace

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 23, 2015



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