Kissing After Dark Poem by james watkin

Kissing After Dark

Rating: 4.0


Beneath what, diviner realms
Through stars uprose in
How well I commend you, Night
For now exposing
Those true love depths, infinite
Bright-eyed from out one.
Unimagined for propriety's
Sun-lit repression.

Tuesday, August 3, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: kiss,night
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luis A. Estable 03 August 2021

Not bad. I like the not so obvious language to develop what`s going on. And I mean the situation.

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james watkin

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