Walk Me Through... Poem by james watkin

Walk Me Through...

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Walk me through these feelings.
These your private grounds
hurtful-stepping, moaned through.
Engulfed darkly too.
And by one skied hand-flash
Sharp taunts, i'll make clear
The image, as it conforms
To passing hail storms!

Wednesday, August 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 09 September 2021

A fabulous little piece of work! Appreciated the core of it.

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Julia Luber 31 August 2019

Fabulous. Rich with a sense of commandment through poetry.

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james watkin 13 September 2019

Thanks so much again Julia. Sorry for late reply!

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Mini Troubadoura 26 December 2018

Enjoyed the imagery. It is hard enough to walk through our own feelings, let alone with someone else.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 September 2018

Walk me through these feelings. hurt, moaning, love, a very fine poem . it has depth.. tony

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