Walk me through these feelings.
These your private grounds
hurtful-stepping, moaned through.
Engulfed darkly too.
And by one skied hand-flash
Sharp taunts, i'll make clear
The image, as it conforms
To passing hail storms!
I had much luck to have come across your scintillating poem, God has pointed me the way to and I am Him very grateful. I have received again so many Blessings from Him. Thank you so much for sharing, James!
Truly a Beauty of a poem, and such powerful last lines, I am impressed, James, a Gem of myriad value
A fabulous little piece of work! Appreciated the core of it.
Enjoyed the imagery. It is hard enough to walk through our own feelings, let alone with someone else.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Walk me through these feelings. hurt, moaning, love, a very fine poem . it has depth.. tony