That Gaze, Once Turned Poem by james watkin
That Gaze, Once Turned
That gaze, once turned
Smiles upon me forever.
Those eyes, once burned
As the stars never go out.
This earth, one keeps
Sunblest for day, though set
Yet in song; in perfume yet.
This earth, moreover
Clear for night, against Time's will
Still pain-assuaged; tranquil still.
Very passionate and amazing write. A work of an intricate mind.
Superb eloquence and remarkable rhythm, profound thoughts expressed and vivid images painted. Bravo!
I adored this brevity piece not only because the last verse mentioned one of my favorite words *grins* but because artistry was inked in every line.
Oh many thanks again fellow poet. Wonderfully uplifting comments. For one who feels so small in this world!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/3/2024 5:55:15 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A wonderful poem! Loved reading this splendid little poem....top score!