james watkin

Gold Star - 31,446 Points (26/4/65 / Melbourne Australia)

That Gaze, Once Turned - Poem by james watkin

That gaze, once turned
Smiles upon me forever.
Those eyes, once burned
As the stars never go out.
This earth, one keeps
Sunblest for day, though set
Yet in song; in perfume yet.
This earth, moreover
Clear for night, against Time's will
Still pain-assuaged; tranquil still.

Topic(s) of this poem: memory

Comments about That Gaze, Once Turned by james watkin

  • (8/16/2019 12:57:00 AM)

    I adored this brevity piece not only because the last verse mentioned one of my favorite words *grins* but because artistry was inked in every line. (Report)Reply

    james watkin(8/16/2019 1:03:00 AM)

    Oh many thanks again fellow poet. Wonderfully uplifting comments. For one who feels so small in this world!

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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (7/2/2019 12:55:00 AM)

    A well crafted excellent poem, sir James....10++++ (Report)Reply

    james watkin(7/2/2019 8:12:00 AM)

    Thanks again Bernard

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  • Jez Brul (7/1/2019 11:50:00 PM)

    A vivid reminiscence of a beloved...still fresh like perfume that lingers on.Wonderful execution. (Report)Reply

    james watkin(7/2/2019 8:12:00 AM)

    Thanks so much Jez

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 1, 2019

Poem Edited: Friday, July 5, 2019

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