Kite Mwen Oswa Renmen Mwen Poem by Hebert Logerie

Kite Mwen Oswa Renmen Mwen

Ti cherie, kitem oswa renmenm
Si ou kitem
Mwen pral byen
Si ou renmen mwen
Ti kèm pral pou ou.

Ti chouchou, frapem oswa bom
Si ou frapem
Mwen pap goumen ak ou
Si ou bom
Map tounen yon las pou ou.

Lanmou komik anpil
Menm lè li fè solèy
Lè nou kole ansanm
Lè nou tou de gen rezon
Ti chouchou, renmenm epi bom.


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Hébert Logerie se otè plizyè koleksyon pwezi.

This is a translation of the poem Leave Me Or Love Me by Hebert Logerie
Tuesday, January 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 24 January 2020

I think this is Creole. Wow! It's so different from French and English...it's like a whole different language. I compared this version line by line with the English version. Both have nice rhythm. It's admirable that the poet can write melodically in three languages.

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