Known Concept Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Known Concept

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It is known concept
We have to follow it promptly
Nothing comes in life that easily
Do not expect it to come readily

Life is not that rosy
It keeps you always busy
Makes you to struggle for an every inch
You feel and experience salt in wounds and pinch

If you know and realize
At an early stage for being not wise
It will be certainly a surprise
As life does not seem to be challenge or promises

For a man it is 'do or die' situation
Lot many problems and questions
Joy and happiness remains miles away
Life stands as an illusion and only thorns in the way

It is nice to hold ground
Loose no hope and ready to go around
Amidst deception, treachery and dejection
It shapes your decision with concrete action

Real person tries to know from within
Ability that makes to surge ahead and win
Never allows frustration to take over
Plans in advance and builds safety cover

I found love in your early move
There was no need to prove
It stood on rocky ground
It was always ready and found

It might have run into rough weather
But it was meant to add a shining feather
You were destined to be as tough bargainer
Not novice or just beginner

I find everybody learns through process
When he or she is denied access
The river finds it way through zigzag
Ups and down comes everywhere in stages

I feel happy when time comes to look back
Life seems to be easy and like cake walk
I appreciate any individual that has attained
With integrity and honesty the level is maintained

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 December 2012

deep and quite right Sam Kealii Lu28 minutes ago I love your poem and agree with you 100%. Written from experiences? Comment +1 Very descriptive

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 December 2012

Maitreya Heart29 minutes ago The rhyme was good but strained. Cadence not quite on the mark. You have a very good way with description. I could visualize what you were describing easily.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 December 2012

It is known concept We have to follow it promptly Nothing comes in life that easily Do not expect it to come readily

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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