Kumarmani Mahakul....a jewel born in a GREAT(MAHA) FAMILY(KUL)
My hearty thanks, dear 'Mahakul Jee'!
For filling my heart with spotless glee!
Can't find words, what I should say?
Only 'Thanks'? , not enough would be!
Big is the question, to solve for me
Who should I praise, just you or He?
For honoring me as 'Jovial Zephyr! '
Or 'The almighty' for creating thee?
It's for sure, It is God, the great!
Who has the entire power to elate
You, for all, with infinite love....!
So proud of you, for your feat to rate.
Surely, 'He' blessed you a heart so cool,
And gave a birth in the great 'Mahakul'
yours' is a heart, 'so noble and kind'
which is made, over our hearts, to rule!
Devanshu Patel
Chicago
10/24/18
Wow! This is overwhelming response poem and a poem of thanksgiving. I am deeply touched by your kind words. You have beautifully narrated every line. God is the greatest power and he grants us love, peace and success. You deserve for a title of honour due to high poetic skill. You are noble at the same time and tell that you are not a poet but a common person. You are uncommon in common appearance. You are special. We congratulate you. Excellent poem! ..10
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Surely, 'He' blessed you a heart so cool, And gave a birth in the great 'Mahakul' yours' is a heart, 'so noble and kind' which is made, over our hearts, to rule! - - - - - - - - - -Sri Kumarmani Mahakul is a great honorable poet with a noble heart, and highly gifted poetic skill.His gracious, loving and friendly attitude towards other fellow poets is really praiseworthy. Your poem rightfully gives tributes to our poet Jewel Sri Kumarmani Mahakul.Thank you for sharing.