Monday, June 26, 2017

Kyrgyzstan Is The Country Of My Dreams, Comments

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Kyrgyzstan is the country of my dreams,
Where town and village are above the clouds.
Where rivers quietly wind between the mountains.
Where features are so mild as well as twists.
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Liza Sud
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Edward Kofi Louis 05 August 2017

Between the mountains! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 June 2017

Hi Liza, Beautiful poem on natural beauty of the land you love. Wonderful expressions, capturing your emotional bond with the landscape: Kyrgyzstan is the country of my dreams, Where town and village are above the clouds. Where rivers quietly wind between the mountains. Where features are so mild as well as twists. The following lines too are captivating: And landscape is as earthly paradise, stark-frozen, beautiful and devastated. There's no abhorrent and intrusive bright, the sea does not make noise like din of ravens. Especially: : din of ravens: : ! But I am not able to relate to the word, : : DEVASTATED: : I wonder what this word is doing here, in a poem expressing the fullness of the nature. I find it out of place. Mut a lovely poem, deserving a fantastic 100++ -unnikrishnan

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