Lady Melody

Rating: 2.0

She dances swiftly through your ears
Precious melodies brushing away all of your tears
Her voice is as sweet as honey
It makes the greyest of days seem sunny
Runs throughout your bones and inside your veins
You've now forgotten all your worries and pains
The treble comes, the troubles shall leave
The notes that she sings will leave you at peace

Wednesday, January 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,music,peace,peaceful,songs,worries
Sister Frances 19 January 2017

Don't you just love that music can make or break your mood. I have breakup songs I can't listen too and feel good songs I'm always listening to :)

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Jeremy Willson 20 January 2017

Music is way to a womans heart that's why I play guitar xD

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Tom Billsborough 19 January 2017

Judith and the Crow recommended you. I like your poem. My only doubt is that the second line is too long and disturbs the fine rhythm of the rest of the piece. I think I'd lose precious memories. The overall content is very good and I shall be reading more of your poems soon.

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Jeremy Willson 19 January 2017

It says precious melodies not memories lol but it does talk about losing all your worries and pains that just means whatever it is thats stressing you out. Thanks for the read much appreciated! .

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