Young and Smart


Land Of Mer - Poem by Young and Smart

The Demons are those who make small children cry,
But those who cry are prayed upon at night,
For their time is nigh
When the Demons are visible to human sight

To see the screaming beings go
Being dragged by the Devil’s creatures
The time is near- The once gently image of the moon is gaining an eerie glow
The poor children… Taken by the things with such atrocious features

The screams have stopped
The Moon has retreated, bringing the Demons with her
All these grimacing memories must be locked
Inside of the Demon’s playground; The land of Mer


Comments about Land Of Mer by Young and Smart

  • (9/29/2007 12:11:00 PM)

    you are definitely young and smart. your poem is moving. i love it (Report) Reply

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  • (8/31/2007 5:15:00 PM)

    Wow this is so amazing. Its really imaginative and creative, well done! x-x-x (Report) Reply

  • (8/16/2007 7:04:00 PM)

    well written
    please read
    some of mine
    if you haven't
    all ready shelby
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  • (8/14/2007 12:40:00 PM)

    This is an incredible piece. Very creative. (Report) Reply

  • (8/9/2007 9:49:00 AM)

    Dear Magiee
    your poem is very inspiring.actually you are a gifted poet.

    we seldom forget to honour poets in their life time
    but after death we give them praise i.e. John Donne
    who was a great poet
    please read my poems and criticise me.
    with love and regards
    Wilfred John
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  • Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele (7/28/2007 9:47:00 PM)

    How young and how smart -

    And should this matter to you? In the land of mer, I would think age and wisdom would protect you. But then it doesn't matter does it?

    Just playing with you. good stuff!

    Cheryl
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  • (7/5/2007 12:07:00 PM)

    very nice...........now i am afraid. (Report) Reply

  • (6/23/2007 11:37:00 AM)

    that is soooooooooooooo cute
    i love your poems
    they touch my heart
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 17, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 12, 2011


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