Larosh Jan Poem by Xelam Kan™

Larosh Jan

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On a frosty morn of 26.2.14
my stoic heart got sick and sore(as if venom is sprinkled on a skin)
and at that moment; goodness my!
that poisoned every wind
(when she was called in) .
In frustration i felt
my patience evanesced,
like a winter sun- glowing cold.
At 10 a.m
(besides swash of rain and wind)
i heard;
a cry of a child
though meek and mild(a sign of life)
appeared from the frozen walls
of the 'Country Hall'. And after-while
like a lil hare wild,
he opened his eyes and was welcomed
by the seven skies.
Once a spirit, he is now from us.

Wednesday, March 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: child
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Composed later in the night after i heard the very first cry of my new born baby...Larosh john
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 15 March 2016

Bri Edwards had sent this poem to me. Though it is written from a man's point of view still Being a mother and grand mother I enjoyed this poem very much. Glad to have come to know of your poetry.

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Bri Edwards 14 March 2016

well, almost two years to the day i left another comment, he we are again. i had forgotten this poem, but i LOVE IT. to MyPoemList.......if it isn't there already. again, i loved: In frustration i felt my patience evanesced, see my earlier comment for more praise and (of course) intelligent words. of course your name is now changed! of the poems i've read from you, i think i understand and appreciate/enjoyed this one most of all. i hope mom and child are well; oh, and you also/too! ! bri :)

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