(last Night Dream!) Poem by Hassan Almadlouh

(last Night Dream!)



(Last Night Dream!)

In my dream, I saw you dressed in white.Your smile warmed our place.
Every thing surrounded us was white.
I couldn’t take my eyes off you when I saw you as an angel.
I saw you dressed in white. I saw you last night

my eyes were confused
Whether that was a dream or reality?
I was wondering! …
Should I approach you, or only be content with what I have.
I stood in silence till you came toward me, then you whispered to me…
You Held my hand, and then you took me with you to your universe.
I was one human among thousands of angels.
Every one looked at me as a stranger.
But your smile and your hand made me feel safe.
Your childlike kisses made me close my eyes.


I woke up after our journey in your heaven
I hoped that was my day, tomorrow, and after
The dream was too short but I was lucky to see you again
That what I always want, to see you again and again
So give me another chance, let me see you
Let me tell you, how amazing you are
You’ll find my heart is yours
You’ll find my tears are yours,
And all of me is yours
I will be waiting to whisper in your ear
“ O Angel I love you”

By Hassan Almadlouh
Toronto, Canada

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eu Stress 25 September 2008

You are very fortunate to find someone like that. It's great to have lovely dreams. But it's better to live in reality. So, don't just dream. Try to concretize your dreams into reality. Wish you all the best!

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Ency Bearis 25 September 2008

a nice narrative verses..well done..keep on writing.. Ency Bearis

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Joseph Poewhit 25 September 2008

That is a very nice poem

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Good start, dear Hassan Almadlouh. I liked the poetic phrase 'You’ll find my tears are yours'.Unusual, but this is poetry.Go ahead: read, try, test, retry your poems. Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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